A Story I'm Writing

Hello! I'm at my stepbrother's baseball game, so I probably won't be able to get any pictures up today.

:( I did however, start a new writing piece. Here it is-

    I darted around the foggy forest, trying to find an opening in the misty shadows. "It's like a maze in here!" I thought. I spotted something coming my way, so I immediately scrambled under a holly-bush.

   Stealthily curving through the trees, a silent shark flew into my sight with spooky ease. I clutched the periwinkle amulet that hung loosely around my neck. The shark slowly approached my bush and I pressed myself to the ground clenching my teeth.

    I knew the shark had seen me. 

I don't know why the text got bigger... Anyway, what do you guys think so far? What do you like? What could I improve? I'd appreciate input! Thanks!

-Tenley

P.S: Here is the prompt that inspired me-