Saturday, May 2, 2015

Story that needs a title Part 3



Here's part 3 to the story I'm writing, I still need a title! (Make sure to go back and read part 1 and 2 before you read this.)

   "WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?!" Jade screamed at me. I leaned back, frightened. Jade continued, "SINCE MOM DIED I'VE BEEN WORKING VERY HARD FOR YOU, AND YOU REPAY ME BY ALMOST GETTING US BOTH KILLED?!" "I... I didn't mean to... I mean, I just..." I trailed off, unable to think of an excuse.
  "Oh, you didn't mean to huh?" Jade screamed on, "Well then what were you doing in Malum Woods? Hmm?" "I... I..." I showed her the amulet. Jade's eyes grew wide at the site of the jewel. "Where did you get that?!" She asked me, gasping as she tapped it's sparkling surface. "In... In the forest." I said softly. Jade saw right through my lie. "You stole it didn't you!" Jade stepped back, she looked scared.  We both knew that with me being only 12, Jade would be the one responsible for any crime I committed.

:) I already have more than that written, but I'm making you guys wait! MWAHAHA! :D I'll post part 4 whenever I get at least 4 different people to comment on this! So... Comment away! 

-Tenley

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